第266页 | 300 Days of Better Writing | 阅读 ‧ 电子书库

同步阅读进度,多语言翻译,过滤屏幕蓝光,评论分享,更多完整功能,更好读书体验,试试 阅读 ‧ 电子书库

Day 274: Criticize elliptical expressions carefully.

Elliptical expressions are phrases and clauses that leave out implied words. Consider this sentence.

“I like cookies more than cake.”

Here, the elliptical expression is “more than cake.” It implies the words “I like,” as in “I like cookies more than I like cake.” This elliptical expression won’t cause clarity problems. Now consider this sentence.

“I like cookies more than John.”

This sentence could have two very different meanings.

 
I like cookies more than John likes cookies.I like cookies more than I like John.

 

 

The problem is that the sentence doesn’t give the reader any clues to figure out which interpretation is correct. The solution is to provide sufficient clues so that only one interpretation is possible. Assuming that the sentence means that I like cookies more than John likes cookies, I could revise the sentence as follows.

“I like cookies more than John does.”

Criticize your elliptical expressions carefully to make sure they mean only what you intend.

请支持我们,让我们可以支付服务器费用。
使用微信支付打赏


上一页 · 目录下一页


下载 · 书页 · 阅读 ‧ 电子书库