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Day 249: Use bargain verbs.
A bargain verb is a single word that describes an action in a particular way. In a sense, a bargain verb combines an action with its description. Consider this sentence.
“The bicycle wheels made a high-pitched whistling sound as he rode by.”
Instead of using the weak verb “made” and the descriptive phrase “a high-pitched whistling sound,” we can use the bargain verb whirr, which includes both the action and its description. Whirr, therefore, is a bargain verb. This gives us the following revision.
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“The bicycle wheels whirred as he rode by.”
The result of using bargain verbs is concise, active text. It is also more engaging for the reader.
